Easy Words to Use as Sentence Starters to Write Better Essays

Updated on October 6, 2017
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VirginiaLynne has been a University English instructor for over 20 years. She specializes in helping people write essays faster and easier.

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Transition

Word or phrase that shows relationship between ideas. Usually used at the start of a sentence.

Improve Your Writing Today

Can you quickly and easily improve your writing? Yes. For over 20 years, I've been teaching the tips I share below to my students and every time they apply these tips, their writing gets dramatically better. Why? Three reasons:

  • These tips and transition words help you resist the old habit of simple subject-verb sentence structure and develop richer and more nuanced ideas.
  • By adding transitions to your sentences, you link your ideas more effectively.
  • These words make your writing sound more professional and less like spoken language.

Improving Your Essay: Choosing the Perfect Words
Improving Your Essay: Choosing the Perfect Words

How To Use Sentence Starter Lists

The most important tip for improving your writing quickly is to follow one rule:

Start every sentence in a paragraph with a different word. How? Here is my step-by-step guide:

  • Use the transition list as you write: Think about how the sentences in your paragraph are related to one another. If you are comparing and contrasting two ideas, then use the "Showing Contrast" transition words (see list below). Are you writing about steps in a process? Then use the "Adding to an Idea" transition words below. When writing about something that happened, use the "Sequence/Time" transitions I've provided.
  • Using the transition list while you are revising: Sometimes, it is easier not to worry about these words until your final draft stage, especially if you are a beginning writer. How do you do this? Use the following tips:
  1. Go through your first draft and circle the first word in every sentence.
  2. If you use the same word to start a sentence twice in a paragraph, then you need to choose another transition word and re-word the sentence.
  3. How to choose transition words? Think about how each sentence fits with the one before it.

Does this sentence add information? Then use "moreover," "furthermore," or another word that adds to the idea.
If this sentence contrasts with the previous sentence, you might use "however" or "on the other hand."
If it is a time sequence, use "next," "then," or consider using "first," "second," etc.
Don’t use the same transition too often. Also, don't forget the comma after the transition word and don't forget to put the subject of the sentence after the comma.

Choosing the Right Word

What makes using transitions improve your writing is that it forces you to explain the connections between your ideas. Ask yourself:

  1. What does the sentence before this one say?
  2. How does this sentence relate to that one?
  3. Scan the list for a transition that seems to fit best. You can also use these questions for help:

Does this sentence add information? Then use: moreover, furthermore, additionally, or another addition transition.

Does the sentence contrast or contradict? Use: however, on the other hand, in contrast, or another contrasting transition.

Are you writing something that happens in order? Use: next, then, or consider using time order like first, second,etc.

Does this sentence add evidence? Use: for example, consequently, for this reason, or another consequence transition.

Does the sentence emphasize an idea? Use: obviously, especially, as a rule, particularly or another emphasizing transition.

Tips to Remember

1. Use a variety of transition words, not the same one.

2. Put a comma after the transition word.

3. Put the subject of the sentence after the comma.

Choosing the Right Word to Start, End, and Transition Topics
Choosing the Right Word to Start, End, and Transition Topics

Transition Word List

Words to Show Contrast
Words to Add to an Idea
Words That Show Consequence
Words That Add Emphasis
although
additionally
accordingly
admittedly
besides
also
as a result
above all
conversely
again
because
as a rule
however
as well as
consequently
as usual
in contrast
besides
due to
assuredly
in comparison
comparatively
for this reason
certainly
instead
consequently
for this purpose
chiefly
likewise
coupled with
hence
especially
nevertheless
correspondingly
otherwise
granted
on the one hand…on the other hand
furthermore
since
generally speaking
on the contrary
in addition
so then
for the most part
other than
indeed
subsequently
in this situation
outside of
in fact
therefore
no doubt (undoubtedly)
rather
identically
thereupon
obviously
similarly
likewise
this is why
of course
yet
moreover
thus
ordinarily
still
similarly
wherefore
particularly
whereas
whereas
 
singularly
 
 
 
unquestionably
 
 
 
usually

2. Use a Variety of Words When Citing Examples

 
 
 
 
especially
for one thing
in particular (particularly)
specifically
chiefly
as an illustration
markedly
this can be seen in
for/as an example
illustrated with/by
namely
such as
for instance
in this case
including
 
Use any of these alternatives to add clarity and variety to your writing.
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Easy Ways to Improve Your Essay

3. Use Different Words to Order Events and Sequence Time

 
 
 
 
first... second... third...
currently
with this in mind
in turn
generally... furthermore... finally
during
for now
later on
in the first place... also... lastly
earlier
immediately
meanwhile
to be sure... additionally... lastly
eventually
in the meantime
next
first... just in the same way... finally
finally
for the time being
then
basically... similarly... as well as
first of all
the next step
simultaneously
afterward
to begin with
in conclusion
soon
at first
in the first place
in time
while
Use a wide variety of words to show how ideas are chronologically related.

4. Use Interesting Words When Summarizing

 
 
 
 
after all
in any event
in other words
on balance
all in all
in brief
in short
that is (that is to say)
all things considered
in conclusion
in brief
therefore
briefly
in essence
in summary
to put it differently
by and large
indeed
in the final analysis
to sum up
hence
on the whole
in the long run
to summarize
in any case
overall
namely
finally
Use a wide variety of words to sum up the point you are making.

Example

Short paragraph without transition words:

Cell phones have changed our family communication for the worse. Parents complain their teenagers spending too much time on their phone. Teenagers are annoyed that they can't get the attention of their parents who are always working or shopping on their phones. We need to make some changes.

Adding transition words:

Generally speaking, cell phones have changed our family communication for the worse. Obviously, parents complain about their teenagers spending too much time on their phones. Moreover, teenagers are annoyed that they can't get the attention of their parents who are always working or shopping on their phones. Unquestionably, we need to make some changes.

Improving Your Writing Over Time

Just following my tips to add transition words to your essay can often make your essay much better and will probably improve your grade. Inevitably, as soon as I tell my classes about this technique their writing improves dramatically. Better yet, the more you use transition words in revision, the more you begin to add that technique to your writing during the first draft.

Why does that help? It begins training you to think about how your ideas relate to one another and helps you to write essays that are deeper, more connected and logical. If you've found this technique helpful, or if you have another sentence starting technique, please add your comments below to help out other writers.

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      Wolffy 2 weeks ago

      Thank you for this, I used this for my essay and I got an A.

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      THANKS FOR THE HELP BECAUSE I WAS REALLY IN TROUBLE GETTING ALL MY WORK DONE!!!!!!!!

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      Olivia 6 weeks ago

      This helped me a lot.

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      Virginia Kearney 7 weeks ago from United States

      Hi jlc--I'm glad to hear that you work hard at your revision. I'm not sure about the "Same for" as a start. Could you give me the full sentence? I can't think of a sentence that is correct which uses that beginning; however, sometimes in conversation and dialogue, it is appropriate to write what people are speaking, even if it is not correct grammar.

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      Thank you very much from Greece, you are great. HAVE A HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!!!

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      jlc 7 weeks ago

      I may revise 50 times and I stop only when I no longer change any word.

      But what about starting a sentence with "Same for..." ?

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      Virginia Kearney 4 months ago from United States

      Hi Lulu! I used to assign a reflection journal in my class. What I had my students do was to either just reflect on something that happened that week, or to talk about something they had read or seen in the media, or to reflect on a question. You probably need to check out my articles on reflection and personal experience essays. You can find my other articles by searching this website, by looking at my profile page or looking at the links to the side of this article.

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      Virginia Kearney 4 months ago from United States

      Hi Tammy--I'm so very glad this helped you. Thanks for letting me know! You made my day.

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      Tammy Ballard 4 months ago

      I just started college at age 47. The instructor said write a summary and impact response paper on pages 9 to 36. I immediately panicked, after reading your article I'm feeling much more confident in doing my first college assignment. Thank you so much!!!!

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      Virginia Kearney 4 months ago from United States

      Hi Cambry--Thanks so much for letting me know this helped you. I've had almost a million views from this one idea now. It is very gratifying to know I have helped people learn to write better.

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      Cambry 4 months ago

      Thank you so much! This helped me with my writing assesment and I got an A+! Thank you!!!

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      Virginia Kearney 4 months ago from United States

      Hi Harni--I have lots of help for writing essays of all sorts. Just follow the links to the side of this article, or look at the links to different kinds of essays on my profile page.

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      Harni 4 months ago

      Hiya

      This helped me sooo much Thank You

      I was just wondering how to start an essay like the introduction

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      Virginia Kearney 4 months ago from United States

      Hi Ryan, You can use any of the words here in front of the "I" or you can use a phrase from the end of the sentence. Here is an example:

      I am going to the store because I need to buy groceries.

      Because I need groceries, I'm going to the store.

      Frankly, I need groceries, so I'm going to the store.

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      Ryan C. 4 months ago

      Hi, I was just wondering easy ways to replace I at the beginning of a sentence. Sometimes, I struggle with this, and the replacements I find sound unnatural. This is a great article though.

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      Virginia Kearney 5 months ago from United States

      Hi Sepphora, you want to start by underlining all the first words in your sentences. When you find you are using the same word to start a sentence (especially in the same paragraph) you should use one of these ideas instead.

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      sepphora 5 months ago

      my problem is the different word to use or replace .

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      Virginia Kearney 5 months ago from United States

      Hi Mimi--To avoid the passive sentence, you want to put the actor first. In your example, one way to fix this is to ask "who considered Mimi?" Then instead of "was given consideration" you would use the more direct "considered." Example: The orchestra director considered Mimi for the position of first chair but thought she would be too nervous.

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      Mimi 5 months ago

      How do you write non-passive sentences? For example, Mimi was given consideration...

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      Virginia Kearney 7 months ago from United States

      Hi, Thomas--I'm glad you asked. I have over 100 articles to help people improve their writing, including ideas for proofreading your own essay and questions you can use to have other people evaluate your essay to help you improve your writing. I also have an article on effective sentences and grammar help for using punctuation marks. You can find these articles by looking at my profile page or following the links on the side with my name. In working with non-native writers, I find the most important editing technique is to have several people look at your essay carefully and to read the essay out loud as you proofread. My final best tip is to focus on one or two rules a time as you go through the paper. Then you can make sure that you have corrected for that error carefully. Hopefully, your instructor can help guide you to know which rules are most important for you to focus on first. I'm afraid I don't know of any websites where you can submit your work to get help.

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      Thomas 7 months ago

      Hey, great article!

      Do you have any suggestions for non-native english speakers that are working on an english essay? Especially regarding proof reading?

      Are there any platforms where one can get help from others?

      Thanks!

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      Virginia Kearney 7 months ago from United States

      Hi Mahmoud! I have over 100 articles on writing that are published here on Letterpile. You can find help with grammar and also on how to structure sentences and essays. Look at my profile or follow the links to the side that have my name.

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      Mahmoud 7 months ago

      Thanks. That was great and useful. Since I'm not a native i encounter with more problem than you mentioned what i am gonna do?

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      Ana 7 months ago

      Absolutely amazing tips!

      Thank you!

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      Sam 8 months ago

      Nice article Virginia, I have gained from it a lot especially the transition words. being a newbie at content writing this article helps.

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      himabindu 9 months ago

      Hi Virginia Kearney,

      Thank you so much for the quick response.

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      Virginia Kearney 9 months ago from United States

      Hi, Himabindu- "So," is generally used as a coordinating conjunction (others are "and," "but," "or," and "yet") and therefore would generally not be used correctly to start a sentence, but rather as a way to join two sentences. Example:

      The bookstore didn't have what we wanted, so we went elsewhere.

      However, in your example, you are using "so" as an interjection in a conversational style sentence. You could vary this by saying:

      Actually, I don't...

      In reality, I don't

      Furthermore, I really don't...

      The truth is that I really don't...

      In the second example, you are using "as" in an introductory phrase, which is another way to vary your sentences besides just using a sentence starter transition word. When you are trying to decide how to write a sentence differently, you need to decide what that sentence is doing. Is it adding to what you've already said? Then use words like "Additionally" or "Furthermore." Is it contradicting or changing the direction? Use "However," "In contrast" or "On the other hand." In your two examples, you are talking about the cause, so the best choices are "Because," "Since":

      Since this book is not useful to me, I really don't want it on my shelf.

      Because this book wasn't useful to me, I don't want it on my shelf.

      You can also vary the meaning a bit with sentences like this:

      In general, this book wasn't really useful to me, so I don't want it on my shelf.

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      Himabindu 9 months ago

      hi.. this post is very useful. If I have to use transition words that means, 'so' or 'as' or 'that's why' what I have to use? For example, I say " So, I don't want to use this in my book" or " As this book is not useful to me, I don't want to see this on my shelf." If I have to say the same sentences in a different way, how can I say?

      Please help.

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      Fatima Roque 9 months ago

      Thank you so much, this will help me in my IELTS preparation especially in writing and speaking as well. :)

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      Ronald Cole 9 months ago

      This information has helped me a great deal. I have never been one to write much using transition words has always been a weakest.

      Thanks

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      Virginia Kearney 10 months ago from United States

      Hi "Hannah Baker," I'm so glad to hear that you are writing a book. My teenage daughter is also a writer and I think it is really wonderful that anyone can now write something and post it online for others to read. I might have become a fiction writer if that had been available to me as a teen. Thank you for spending the time to know that I've helped you. I teach college students but I have found many younger people are also looking at my articles and I'm thinking about creating some information just for them. I'd love to hear what younger people want to know about how to write better.

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      Hannah Baker 10 months ago

      My name is not really Hannah Baker though, just a cover up. I'm a teen I and love writting. I'm recently stuck on a book that I'm writting, called "The Chosen One," and I was getting for frustrated because I kept using the same words or phrases. I ended up finding this website and it really helped me, so thank you very much.

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      Virginia Kearney 10 months ago from United States

      Hi Jodah! I'm often trying to force myself to use some new transition words in my writing as well. Along with the words I put in this article, you can also use different kinds of phrases at the start of a sentence. I especially like gerund phrases like "Walking down the street," "Thinking about my children," or "Writing in a new way."

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      John Hansen 10 months ago from Queensland Australia

      This is very helpful Virginia. I never start sentences in a paragraph with the same word, and do use transition words, but I probably only use the same favourites over and over (about 10) as you mentioned in your comment to Bianca.

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      Hammad 11 months ago

      Solved my biggest problem as I always tend to use same transitions again and again in a paragraph. Thanks, I appreciate your effort.

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      Collin 11 months ago

      this really helped thanks

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      Virginia Kearney 11 months ago from United States

      Bianca--I generally find the adding and contrasting words are the most useful for me. In fact, I think that when you start to use this technique that most people pick 6-10 favorite words and use them most of the time.

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      Bianca di'Angelo 11 months ago

      Thank you for this. I'm writing an essay on how advertising affects youth but I keep needing to pause every few words to try and find just the right one. Another or additionally... overall or in conclusion. I think the most helpful ones for me were the words to add ideas

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      Eriurhukpe 11 months ago

      This is a lifeline for me.thank you

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      Virginia Kearney 11 months ago from United States

      Michaela--Whether this will work as a subject for your paper depends on your assignment. You could do "legends about elves" and find evidence on that.

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      Virginia Kearney 11 months ago from United States

      Hi, Liv-I have two articles that could help you. One is about writing a thesis sentence and the other is about writing topic sentences in paragraphs. Often, these sentence starters can be used to write better topic sentences because they can help you link your ideas and show how one topic sentence either adds or contrasts to the ideas before.

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      Liv 11 months ago

      I don't understand how to start the topic sentence of the paragraph, so I suggest that this page should include starting words for topic sentences in paragraphs

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      Jorge Oliveira 11 months ago

      Thank you so much for showing me how to use transitions with accuracy!

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      Kendall Kincaid 13 months ago

      Thank you for the help!

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      Kayla Miller 13 months ago

      Thank you soo much for the Article! That will come in handy in writing assignments

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      Russell Morrison 13 months ago

      Reading this has given me some new words to start my paragraphs with. Thank you!

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      Oscar 13 months ago

      This helped me improve my writing.Thanks :)

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      wrong your all wrong im a book writer 13 months ago

      your all wrong im a book writer

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      Tawana 13 months ago

      Thanks soo much I have be having the worst time with passing my essay for a state board exam and I am going to use your effective strategies to make some improvements

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      Daniel 14 months ago

      Thank You!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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      Virginia Kearney 14 months ago from United States

      Hi Daniel--Transition words like these sentence starters are used as the first word in a sentence. Often, they have a comma after them, just as I show in this sentence. Here is a sample using some really simple sentences:

      Global warming is increasing. Scientists say ice caps are melting quickly. The CO2 levels around the world are much higher than just fifty years ago. We need to do something now.

      With transition words:

      Unfortunately, global warming is increasing at a rapid rate. In fact, scientists say ice caps are melting quickly. Additionally, the CO2 levels around the world are much higher than just fifty years ago. With this in mind, we need to do something now.

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      Daniel 14 months ago

      I have a question. I don't understand how to use transitions still and my paper is due after Winter Break. Please help?

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      Virginia Kearney 14 months ago from United States

      Hi Dustin! I'm happy that my work has helped you. Please check out my other articles on different types of essays for more help.

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      Dustin 14 months ago

      Thx this helped me out for my essay you will be the only site I will use .

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      B.Mack 15 months ago

      Awesome article, I printed it out to use as a reference.

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      Venkatachari M 16 months ago from Hyderabad, India

      Very useful article for improving one's style of writing. Thanks for sharing this wonderful knowledge.

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      Shirly 17 months ago

      This is a good website for kids

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      Lachlan 17 months ago

      Thanks u helped me with my assignment

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      Emily 17 months ago from Oregon

      I love the charts; they really lay things out concisely. Thanks for the helpful information. I'm glad to add another specific tool to my writing toolbox!

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      Virginia Kearney 17 months ago from United States

      Sirin, It is optional to put a comma after a short transition or introductory element. For example, I can put a comma in this sentence after "example" but the meaning is clear if I don't, so it is all right to leave the comma out. However, you are not wrong to add the comma and it often makes the sentence clearer. Here are some examples and you can decide whether the comma is helpful or not:

      Nevertheless, I believe she is correct in her assumption.

      On the other hand, what they think is also correct.

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      sirin 17 months ago

      Hello,you said that it is important to put a comma after each transition word,but i found in a book i have read that, of Macdwell about British history,he uses no commat after each transition he put.I want to know please :is this permmited in writing or no.And,in the same time, we can't say he is wrong since he is an auther and he publishes books.thank you in advance

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      Virginia Kearney 17 months ago from United States

      Hi, Ahmed! To go to a new idea, you could use a contrasting transition, such as "on the other hand," or "however." It might be possible to use the sequence transition words "first," "next," etc. if you are doing something that happens in time or in space. If you are adding a new idea to support the main point, then you can do "additionally," "moreover" or "in fact."

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      Ahmed 17 months ago

      Interesting, but which words used to start new topic / idea .

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      Mustafa 18 months ago

      thank you so much for doing this it helped me a lot and I'm sure I'll be visiting this page in the future

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      Virginia Kearney 18 months ago from United States

      Congratulations on starting to learn English, Maria! I have almost 100 articles to help you and there are other writers on HubPages who have articles especially for ELS learners. Good luck! Learning English takes work but I know you can do it!

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      maria 18 months ago

      I'm beginners .I wanna to learn English as second language .

      Ithink these words help me a lot.

      thank you

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