Virginia has been a university English instructor for over 20 years. She specializes in helping people write essays faster and easier.
Improve Your Writing Today!
Can you quickly and easily improve your writing? Absolutely! For over 20 years, I've taught these tips to students and seen their writing dramatically improve. Why?
- Using transition words helps you resist the habit of using a simple subject-verb sentence structure.
- Transitions link your ideas more effectively and create more nuanced meaning.
- Finally, transitions make your writing sound more professional and less like spoken language.
How To Use Sentence Starter Lists
The most important tip to quickly improve your writing is to follow one rule:
Start every sentence in a paragraph with a different word. How? Here is my step-by-step guide:
- Use the transition list as you write: Think about how the sentences in your paragraph relate to one another. Are you comparing and contrasting two ideas? Use "Showing Contrast" transition words below. Are you writing about steps in a process? Then use the "Adding to an Idea" transition words below. When writing about something that happened, use the "Sequence/Time" transitions I've provided.
- Using the transition list while you are revising: Sometimes, it is easier not to worry about these words until your final draft stage, especially if you are a beginning writer. How do you do this? Use the following tips:
- Go through your first draft and circle the first word in every sentence.
- If you use the same word to start a sentence twice in a paragraph, then you need to choose another transition word and re-word the sentence.
Choosing the Right Word
How can you choose the right word for each sentence? What makes using transitions improve your writing is that it forces you to explain the connections between your ideas. Ask yourself:
- What does the sentence before this one say?
- How does this sentence relate to that one?
- Scan the list for a transition that seems to fit best. You can also use these questions for help:
Does this sentence add information? Use: moreover, furthermore, additionally, not only...but also, or another addition transition.
Does the sentence contrast or contradict? Use: however, on the other hand, in contrast, yet, conversely, or another contrasting transition.
Are you writing something that happens in order? Use: next, then, in fact, similarly, or a time word like first, second, third, and finally.
Does this sentence add evidence? Use: for example, consequently, for this reason, or another adding transition.
Does the sentence emphasize an idea? Use: obviously, especially, as a rule, particularly, or another emphasizing transition.
Does the sentence start your conclusion: Use: finally, in conclusion, in sum, obviously, or another concluding transition.
Tips to Remember
1. Use a variety of transition words, not the same one.
2. Put a comma after the transition word.
3. Put the subject of the sentence after the comma.
Transition Word List
|Words to Show Contrast||Words to Add to an Idea||Words That Show Cause||Words That Add Emphasis|
as a result
as a rule
as well as
for this reason
for this purpose
on the one hand…on the other hand
on the contrary
for the most part
in this situation
no doubt (undoubtedly)
this is why
as you can see
one other thing
for all of those reasons
2. Use a Variety of Words When Citing Examples
for one thing
in particular (particularly)
as an illustration
this can be seen in
for/as an example
in this case
3. Use Different Words to Order Events and Sequence Time
first... second... third...
with this in mind
generally... furthermore... finally
in the first place... also... lastly
to be sure... additionally... lastly
in the meantime
first... just in the same way... finally
for the time being
basically... similarly... as well as
first of all
the next step
to begin with
in the first place
4. Use Interesting Words When Summarizing
in any event
in other words
all in all
that is (that is to say)
all things considered
to put it differently
by and large
in the final analysis
to sum up
on the whole
in the long run
in any case
once and for all
at the end
Examples of Using Transition Words
Without transition words:
Cell phones have changed our family communication for the worse. Parents complain about their teenagers spending too much time on their phones. Teenagers are annoyed that they can't get the attention of their parents, who are always working or shopping on their phones. We need to make some changes.
Adding transition words:
Generally speaking, cell phones have changed our family communication for the worse. Obviously, parents complain about their teenagers spending too much time on their phones. Moreover, teenagers are annoyed that they can't get the attention of their parents, who are always working or shopping on their phones. Unquestionably, we need to make some changes.
Without transition words
Liz went to the store to get some groceries. She ran into her roommate Joy in the produce section. They argued about whether they were out of blueberries and what they should buy for dinner. Joy insisted that she was better at choosing ripe avocados. Liz retorted that Joy didn't know how to make guacamole correctly and that she was tired of Mexican food every night. They bickered for five minutes. Joy's phone rang. It was their friend Mark inviting them over to his house for dinner. Listening, Liz smiled and nodded. Joy laughed and told him, "We are on our way!"
With transition words
After work, Liz went to the store to get some groceries. In the produce section, she ran into her roommate Joy. First of all, they argued about whether they were out of blueberries, and secondly what they should buy for dinner. Next, Joy insisted that she was better at choosing ripe avocados. Simultaneously, Liz retorted that Joy didn't know how to make guacamole correctly and that she was tired of Mexican food every night. Subsequently, they bickered for five minutes. Finally, Joy's phone rang. Luckily, it was their friend Mark inviting them over to his house for dinner. Listening, Liz smiled and nodded. Consequently, Joy laughed and told him, "We are on our way!"
Improving Your Writing Over Time
Just following my tips to add transition words to your essay can often make your essay much better and will probably improve your grade. Inevitably, as soon as I tell my classes about this technique their writing improves dramatically. Better yet, the more you use transition words in revision, the more you begin to add that technique to your writing during the first draft.
Why does that help? It begins training you to think about how your ideas relate to one another and helps you to write essays that are deeper, more connected and logical. If you've found this technique helpful, or if you have another sentence starting technique, please add your comments below to help out other writers.
Questions & Answers
Question: What are other words can I use instead of "I" when writing an essay?
Answer: If you are writing in the first person, you can't avoid using "I" all the time. However, a good strategy is to avoid putting "I" at the beginning of every sentence. Using the "Easy Words to use as Sentence Starters" lists before the "I" can help you to make the sentences seem more varied. You can also use phrases such as:
As a person with an education background, I feel that...
Having experience in the military, I understand...
With five children in elementary school, my experience has enabled me to...
Personally, the story told by the author seemed irrelevant to the discussion...
For me, the experiences in this article are a valid argument about...
Considering the question carefully, this author feels that the most important point is...
This writer feels that people who are born in California are more likely to...
In my opinion, the facts stated are sufficient to prove...
Although they can be somewhat awkward, you can also use phrases like: "this writer." "people like myself who are born in California, " or "in my opinion" to indicate yourself.
Question: What would be another way to say, "I believe that...?"
Answer: Here are some ideas:
"Without a doubt, I accept the concept that..."
"Truthfully, I agree with.....that..."
Question: What is a good way to start a sentence?
Answer: There are many good ways of starting a sentence. A typical way of starting a sentence in English is with the subject. However, that can become monotonous and that is why I suggest that you try using some of these sentence starters, or "ing" words (called gerunds) or other types of phrases which come before the subject.
Question: What are other words to use instead of using "I" all the time?
Answer: If you are writing in the first person, you can't avoid using "I." However, if you follow the easy five tips, I give for writing better sentences: https://hubpages.com/humanities/Writing-Effective-...
you will be able to hide the fact that you are using "I" a lot by not starting every sentence with the personal pronoun.
Question: What is the best way to start a story?
Answer: Start a story with a vivid illustration, a story, a question, or a personal example.
Question: I keep on using "this" to start a sentence, like I will say "this disruption caused..." or "this corruption later created a...". Is there any way that I can use a different word, or transition to get rid of the repetition?
Answer: Avoiding "this" is an excellent way to improve your writing. You can certainly use any of these sentence starters to help you out. With a sentence starter, you might still use "this," but it won't stand out as repetitive. Additionally, you might want to think about other ways to state the point or combine two ideas together into one longer sentence. See the following:
Inevitably, this disruption caused a problem in society because corruption began to be seen at all levels. Bribes were expected by all public officials. Therefore, the disruption...Moreover, the problem started...Furthermore, without having any way to stop it, the officials in charge began to....this system of corruption.
Question: Are you a real person?
Answer: Yes, I am a real English instructor. I have worked for over 20 years at a large private University in the United States. My biography and picture are on my profile page. I personally respond to all comments and questions which have substance and would be useful to more than just one person. Everything on VirginiaLynne has been written by me, and most of the writing articles are developed from the instructional materials I've written for my own classes.
Question: How do I start a paragraph?
Answer: There are several ways to answer this question, and so, I will try to cover all of the information possible on this topic.
1. Sentence starters are excellent words to use as the first word in a paragraph because they will help you link the ideas of each paragraph together. For example, if the essay is about reasons that Indian food is so tasty, these possible first sentences of the body could be done:
1. First of all, Indian food is wonderful because it uses so many spices...
2. Furthermore, the wonderful taste of Indian food comes from the preparation...
3. Ultimately, the taste of Indian food comes from the variety of ingredients and the creativity of cooks...
2. There are many correct ways to start a paragraph, but in standard English, it is typical to begin each paragraph (except for the first paragraph in an essay) with the topic sentence. A topic sentence tells the main idea of the paragraph. The rest of the paragraph will explain the topic sentence and give examples and reasons to back up that assertion.
In the first paragraph of an essay, you will generally give examples first and then put the thesis sentence at the end of the paragraph. The thesis sentence is the main idea of the whole essay.
3. Finally, in case the question is actually about the formatting of the paragraph, it is important to know that each paragraph in English is indented, and starts with a capital letter (as do all first words in an English sentence).
Question: what are other words can I use instead of "throughout"?
Answer: 1. all through
3. far and near
6. in every part
7. on all accounts
8. from beginning to end
Question: What is a good way to start off an informational essay?
Answer: Informational essays are sometimes called Expository essays or Explaining essays and a good way to start them is to ask questions or give a story about what you will explain. I have more ideas for introductions and full instructions on how to write an informational essay here:https://owlcation.com/academia/How-to-Write-an-Exp...
Question: What other words can I use other than "before?"
Answer: Other words that can replace "before" are:
2. Prior to
4. In anticipation of
8. Up to this time
9. Until now
12. Ahead of
12. In advance of
Question: Can I start a body paragraph by using the phrase “one of the main/ major problems is that ...?"
Answer: Body paragraphs are designed to prove your thesis. Each paragraph in the body of the essay should be a reason for the reader to agree with your thesis. There is no "wrong" phrase to use in the body but each starting sentence (especially for writers who are learning how to do essays) often tells the topic sentence of that paragraph. So it is certainly possible for you to use that phrase if by pointing out the problem you are explaining a reason for your thesis.
Question: What are some ideas for a transition word when introducing a new topic in an essay?
Answer: A new topic will either add, contrast, or conclude the thesis and so you would use the transition word which best explains how that new idea will explain the thesis. Actually, that is the power of using transition words because you can highlight to the reader how the information you are about to explain will modify the thesis idea. Here are some examples categorized by type (or you can see the full list above in the Easy Words article):
Adding reasons or information: furthermore, moreover, in addition, additionally.
Contrasting: however, on the other hand, in spite of, nevertheless.
Concluding: in sum, therefore, finally, in conclusion.
Question: Can I start a sentence with "And"?
Answer: The simple answer is yes. You can start a sentence with "and" and be correct. However, it can make your writing more effective if you try to avoid "and' and use one of the other adding conjunctions listed in my article. Why? "And" is easy and sounds a lot like our typical speech, but when you spend the time to think about which other sentence starter fits, you often get a more nuanced meaning in your sentence. "And" tends to connect two ideas equally but does not always show the relationship between those ideas. Consider the following example which uses two coordinating conjunctions "and" and "but" to start sentences:
Anna went skiing yesterday on the steep run at Whistler that I warned her not to try. And she made it down the hill just fine. But then she slipped on some ice at the bottom of the run and twisted her ankle so badly she can't ski today.
Now look at a re-write which uses sentence starters:
Anna went skiing today on the steep run at Whistler that I warned her not to try. Moreover, she made it down the hill just fine; however, when she got to the bottom, she slipped on some ice and twisted her ankle so badly she can't ski today.
"And," "but," "or," and "so" are all conjunctions which join two sentences together, or explain the relationship between items in a list. Many people are taught not to use them at the start of a sentence, but the truth is that many of us use them all the time when we are speaking, and the Chicago Manual of Style suggests that up to 10% of written sentences start with one of the coordinating conjunctions. Coordinating conjunctions also include "yet," "or," and "nor" and are often remembered by the term FANBOYS (for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so). Final answer? It is not improper or wrong to use coordinating conjunctions to start a sentence, but it may not be the most effective technique and is often overused by less experienced writers. Additionally, since many people have been taught, it is incorrect, others may judge your use of "and" to start a sentence with poor writing and incorrect grammar. Therefore, I tend to tell my students not to use a coordinating conjunction to start sentences if they can avoid it.
Question: How to state a new idea instead of using "firstly"?
Answer: While secondly, thirdly and fourthly are correct terms to use, you would use "first" rather than "firstly." Other possible words are:
To start with
The first reason
To begin with
Question: What other words can I use instead of "that" in essays?
Answer: "That" is a pronoun used to identify a specific thing or person, so, alternatively, you can:
1. use the name of the thing or person
2. use a description of the thing or person
3. use the pronoun: he, she, it
4. use an alternative name for that thing or person
However, I wouldn't worry too much about overusing any particular word because the best way to avoid repetitive sentences is to use these easy sentence starters and to combine your short sentences. See my article about writing effective sentences: https://owlcation.com/academia/Writing-Effective-S...
Question: What can be used in place of "most of"?
In the bulk of cases
The lion's share
The greatest number
Question: What are better ways to say "the start of a new dawn?"
Answer: Phrases like "the start of a new dawn" are cliches which end up making your writing sound stale and outdated. To replace a cliche, you need to think about what that phrase really means or why you are using it in the sentence in the first place. Without the full sentence, it is hard to guess because a lot of times these sorts of phrases are sort of "clearing your throat" types of sentences. However, here are some starting phrases that might work better:
1. A new phase began when...
2. An improvement in the situation started when...
3. Finally, the situation turned around when...
Question: How do I start off explaining a quote?
Answer: You need to tell who said the quote, the title of the book or article that you found the quote in, and then what it means. Next, you would say how that quote helps your own argument point. Here is an example:
In "Would You Want Your Mother to Know?" John Jeffers points out that "Too many people forget that nothing on the Internet is really private," and he goes on to give excellent advice about how people can judge whether they should post something or not. Jeffers's advice clearly indicates that... (go on to explain how this helps your own argument). For more information on how to use quotes in your writing, see my article https://hubpages.com/academia/Examples-of-Summary-...
Question: What can I put instead of "and" as a sentence starter?
Answer: Look at the list of connecting words for substitutes for "and" at the beginning of a sentence. For example: additionally, moreover, in addition, and furthermore. Inside a sentence, there usually doesn't need to be a substitute for "and" if you are connecting two or more ideas. You can't really overuse "and." However, if your teacher is complaining about that, it probably signals that you are writing too simplistic of sentences. Therefore, you need to use these sentence starters to help you out and also look at my article on 5 Easy Ways to Write Better Sentences.
Question: What would be another way to say, "have you ever heard"?
Answer: Perhaps you have heard the expression...
"Neither a borrower nor a lender be" is something we all have heard.
Question: What's another way of starting a sentence other than "As you read you will find?"
Answer: Here are some alternatives that help you talk about what is in the text:
In the article, it indicates...
The essay shows...
The author reveals...
Ultimately, the article's main point is...
Furthermore, the second paragraph suggests...
Further on, the author argues...
For more "author tags" to connect your analysis with what is in the article, you can see my Hub https://owlcation.com/academia/Using-and-Citing-So...
Question: Which words can I use to start a paragraph? Can we start the paragraph with transition words?
Answer: Transition words make an excellent first word in a paragraph because they help you explain how that paragraph is linked to the ideas in the previous paragraph.
Question: What are other words that I can use instead of "Another moment"?
Answer: In general, "another moment" isn't a phrase I can imagine would be used very often in writing and it is all right to use a phrase once in a while. Here are some alternatives:
In a while
After a time
After a short interval had passed
Once in a while
At a different time
Question: What word can I use instead of nowadays to start an essay?
Answer: At this period in history
Most of us know think
In the present moment
Question: How can I motivate a reader in the first sentence of an open letter?
Answer: I often advise students to use a question as an opening statement because that helps to get the reader to think about the topic. Another good way to motivate a reader of a letter is to present them with a startling statistic, dramatic story, or interesting fact. Sometimes sentence starters can be helpful in making your sentence more interesting. Here are some sample openings to sentences:
Have you ever wondered what would happen if...?
Did you know that 59% of all African-American men believe...?
You may not believe it, but the truth is that...
Suddenly, with no warning from anyone...
Nothing can prepare you for...
On the one hand we all know...., but, on the other hand, none of us does anything about it.
Question: What's a good way to start a paragraph when you are comparing two characters?
Answer: Start with describing the two characters and contrasting them.
Question: Can you end a sentence with “that is"?
Answer: I don't think that phrase would make an effective ending of a sentence unless you were using it in a conversation.
Question: Are there different types of essays?
Answer: There are many different types of essays that I have written articles about, including:
Cause and Effect
Summary, Analysis and Response
You can find many sample topics on these types of essays on my web pages. You can also find step by step instructions on how to write these essays.
Question: What are other words can I use instead of "So"?
As a result
Question: What are other ways to start an essay?
Answer: Good ways to start an essay are to use:
a real-life story from the news or history
a story from your own life or someone you know (a personal story)
a story from fiction, T.V., or a movie
an example of a typical situation which illustrates the problem or situation you are talking about
a conversation between two people about the issue (real or made up)
facts that everyone knows about the situation
statistics about the situation
an explanation of the problem
more than one of the above.
For example, I often suggest that students start with a personal example of the situation to draw in the reader's attention and then have them give statistics to show the scope of the problem. With any of these examples, you can still use the sentence starters in this article to make your sentences pop out.
Question: Does an essay have to have a bibliography?
Answer: If an essay uses sources, it should include a bibliography which lists the works cited in the essay.
Question: What are some words to use besides "the"?
Answer: "The" is the only definite article we have in the English language and there isn't an actual substitute for saying "the lawn," "the dog" or "the man." We use "the" when there is only one possible thing it could be talking about, and the audience knows exactly which one it would be.
In general, you really can't overuse the word "the." However, your question is probably referring to the problem of your sentences sounding too simple and general. To get rid of that problem, you can substitute a clearer and more specific description of the thing you are referring to rather than the simple "the ...." Here are some samples:
"The man" could be John (his name), our dentist (our relationship to him), that man I met in the subway (a description of a situation), that rather thin and older man (a description of his appearance).
Question: What are other sentence starters for "This is because?"
Answer: What you are describing is a "cause" transition. Here are some possibilities:
As a result...
Because of this... then...
On account of
The reason for
When XX occurred, it caused XX
One thing that resulted was...
One thing that caused this situation was...
Question: Can I start a sentence using the word "My"? Example: My hoarding of unnecessary things is getting out of hand.
Answer: My answer has to be yes! As long as you use "my" as the possessive of something it works. In my example "my answer" uses "my" with a noun and describes whose answer it is. In your example, the "my" is used with a phrase describing an action "hoarding of unnecessary things" which is the subject of the sentence.
Question: Instead of saying "I believe" at the start of a sentence what could I say?
Answer: You can add manyof the other sentence starters in front of "I believe" to make a change. You can also say:
After reading the conclusion, I thought...
Ultimately, I am convinced...
The writer's argument is not convincing in some points....
What seems authentic to me in this piece is...
Here are some alternatives to "I believe"
Sometimes, instructors want you to keep the first person "I" out of the essay. If that is the case, you can say:
In conclusion, there seems to be...
The meaning which the reader takes from this is...
The writer's intention seems to be...
Ultimately, the reader is left feeling...
Question: What sentence starters should I use when writing a persuasive essay?
Answer: Sentence starters are especially important in persuasive writing because they intensify your language and point the reader towards what you feel is most important. Any of these sentence starters will work, but persuasive writing sometimes focuses on the more common or emotionally charged language, avoiding the more academic-sounding words. Here are some examples,
Indeed, you can see that...
In fact, the result of not following this policy is...
Conversely, we know that...
No doubt, the answer is...
Less persuasive (unless you are appealing to an academic audience) would be:
Hence we believe that...
Accordingly, the answer is...
For this reason, we have chosen to say...
Question: What other words can I use instead of "I"?
Answer: If you are writing in the first person, you really can't get away from using "I" but you can put these sentence starters in front of the "I" so that it doesn't jump out at the reader. As a matter of fact, I usually introduce sentence starters to my class when we are doing a personal essay. I have them notice how many times they start a sentence in the personal essay with "I" and then I have them circle all of those "I" sentences. Next, I have them scan the list of words and put one or more in front of the "I" sentences. Another trick is to take a sentence and invert it so that the "I" is not the first word. Here is an example:
Bad Example: I wanted to explain how to use sentence starters and so I used many "I" sentences in this answer.
Rewrite: Because I wanted to explain how sentence starters work, I used many "I sentences in this answer. Go back and see what I did to "eliminate" the "I"!
Question: What would be another way to say "in the middle of the story...?"
Answer: Here are some other ways to talk about the middle of a story:
At the climax of the action
Before the final ending
After establishing the beginning situation
The story continues
At the mid-point in the story
Halfway through, the story continues with
In the meantime
Question: What is a good sentence to end an introductory paragraph with?
Answer: End your introduction with the topic question. The thesis will be the answer to that question and it can be put after the question or as the beginning of the next paragraph. Here is information about writing thesis sentences from my article: https://hubpages.com/humanities/Easy-Ways-to-Write...
Question: What words can I start an essay with?
Answer: Any words can be used to start an essay and there isn't really any particular words or phrase that works best. Generally, I tell students to begin a first draft of an essay by setting a timer and just writing down everything they think or know about the paper topic. This does not have to be full sentences. You can write down just words or phrases. After you've written for about 5-10 minutes, stop and re-read what you have. If you haven't yet decided on a thesis question, this is a good time to choose one. The next step is to answer that question, which makes your thesis answer (main thesis statement). From there, you can decide on your introduction, body, and conclusion. I have many different articles on how to write different kinds of essays. You can Google the type of essay you are writing with my name and this website and you can find a full set of instructions.
Question: How do I write my essay introduction when comparing two texts?
Answer: Your introduction should explain the main point of your essay and what you think is the main differences and/or similarities in the two texts. You can start with a description or short story from each of the two which shows that comparison.
Question: l always start sentences with ''the'' can you help me to stop, please?
Answer: "The" is not an incorrect word to use to start a sentence but you never want to use the same word over and over because it makes your sentences sound repetative and not as professional. If you are using "the" repeatedly, it probably means you are always writing sentences which start with the subject. To fix that, you can switch sentences around to put the object first, add one of these transition sentence starters, or just reword the sentence. For examples and information about writing different kinds of sentences, see my article about "5 Easy Tips to Write Better Sentences in English https://hubpages.com/humanities/Writing-Effective-...
Question: What are other words can I use instead of "My" when writing an essay?
Answer: The word "my" is a possessive pronoun which doesn't really have a substitute. "The pen" is not the same as "my pen" or "his pen," and you would want to use the "my" if it is important to note that the pen belongs to you. You could write, "the pen belonging to me was stolen" instead of "my pen was stolen" but that is a rather awkward and archaic phrasing. It is probably better to use "my" when you need it to indicate that it belongs to you and to work on varying your sentences by using my methods in my 5 Easy Tips to Write Better Sentences: https://hubpages.com/humanities/Writing-Effective-...
Question: Is there a better wording for "I am?"
Answer: You can replace the "am" with a more active verb which describes what you are saying. You can also add an adverb (word ending in "ly" which describes the verb). A final way to vary your word choice is to add some of these sentence starters. Here are some examples:
I often say...
I sometimes defer...
I occasionally decline...
Moreover, I feel that...
Additionally, I don't care for...
However, I've never liked...
Conclusively, I represent a person who...
Question: If I had to self-evaluate myself in a speech, How would I start?
Answer: I'd start with a story that would show both your good and bad points. For example, a time that you spent a whole day getting ready for a friend's birthday only to find out that you'd gotten the wrong day. Then you could say what that reveals about you. I this example you could say, "This shows that I'm a thoughtful person, but not always very careful about the details."
Question: What are other ways to start a sentence instead of "I will explain"?
Answer: "I will explain" is the way that a person might speak when talking to someone but it is never appropriate in an essay because "I will explain" is really the answer to a question someone asks you and in an essay, you are the only one talking. What really works better is just to state the question and then give an answer without talking to the audience directly. Here are some other phrases you could use:
1. Three reasons exist for this problem and they are easy to explain. The first reason is...
2. Clearly, the answer may be simple but requires some explanation.
3. Undoubtedly, the best explanation is really that...
Question: How many sentences should there be in a five-paragraph essay?
Answer: Generally, if you are trying to write just the minimum, you would expect to write five sentences for each paragraph. So 25 sentences in a 5 paragraph essay would be the least you should do.
Question: What sentence starter can I use instead of "the"?
Answer: Any of the words in these lists would work. You should also think of different ways to address your subject. For example, if your subject is "the school" you could also say:
1. The actual name of the school.
2. A description of the place.
3. Some part of the school (our class, a hallway).
4. A synonym: this educational establishment, our place of learning.
5. The name of the school with an adjective or possessive: our friendly school, this horrible school, this exciting school.
Question: I am stuck on writing the first sentence which often determines whether or not the reader wants to continue. How do I write an effective "hook?"
Answer: Using one of these sentence starters is a good way to write a more interesting sentence for your "hook." It also helps to start with an example or a story which will get your reader involved in your paper. Questions can be a good starting sentence, or a vivid description or startling fact. Never start with something boring like "In all of human history..." For example, if you are writing about n start poverty, you can start with some startling facts or a story. Here are some sample first sentences on that topic:
Did you know that in America about 41% of children were living on the brink of poverty in 2016?
Getting ready for school in on a Monday morning, John Jefferson hoped the school breakfast would be a good one since he hadn't eaten anything but crackers since the school lunch on Friday.
Virginia Kearney (author) from United States on September 02, 2020:
Hi Elisa, I have not written a phone voicemail in a narrative, but my instinct is to not write it inside the narrative to make it smoother. Here is my example: Glancing at my screen, I saw a voicemail and my stomach tightened in anxiety. Did I miss the call? Dialing seemed to take forever. Then I heard his voice, "Hello Chris, we hope..."
Elisa Fisher from Texas on September 01, 2020:
I'm writing my first book. I'm writing it as first-person narrative. do you know how I would write a phone voicemail? This is an example how I have it for now.
Hello Chris, we hope to see you at the game tonight. I say.
Virginia Kearney (author) from United States on August 07, 2020:
Hi Weird Girl! That is an interesting question. For the most part, the end of the sentence would not be where most people would try to add variety. However, there are different kinds of sentences that you can write, and using a mix of those kinds of sentences is definitely a way to make your writing better (and they would provide different "ends"). My best article on that would be "Writing Effective Sentences." You can find it by Googling my name, Owlcation and that title.
Weird girl on August 06, 2020:
Is there ending sentence starters?!
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Hi Anggi--I have not published this in book form, but I've thought about doing that and publishing on Amazon. You are motivating me to think about that more!
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This article help me for my research paper in college. But, how can I get this book? I need sentence starters book for my research.
Virginia Kearney (author) from United States on June 20, 2020:
Glad you find this helpful Kenneth. As of today, this article has been viewed over 2,500,000 times! Hopefully, that will help us have better writing. I'm so glad people find it useful!
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Virginia Kearney (author) from United States on April 09, 2020:
Hi Jessie! You can use a variety of words to show reasons or examples for your position:
A third explanation
First, Secondly, Thirdly
Furthermore, an important point
Moreover, the most compelling reason
Jessie on April 08, 2020:
How can I start an essay for examples of three things w/o being repetitive or using the word things
Virginia Kearney (author) from United States on March 15, 2020:
Hi Landyn, good for you for realizing that a business letter needs to be in a more professional tone and that "I" and "the" are very repetitive and make your sentences seem rather less professional. Actually, all of the words in these lists can help you. It might be appropriate to use "I" in the first sentence or at least one of the first sentences if you are introducing yourself, but you can also use the technique of reversing the words in a sentnce or adding an introductory element. to make the sentence sound more interesting. Here are some examples:
I am writing to ask you to consider me for a position in your company because I am an expert in communication technology.
As an expert in communication technology, I am writing to ask you to consider me for a position in your company.
Landyn Lindsey on March 10, 2020:
What would be good word to use at the start of a sentence instead of using “the” and “I” for a letter to a business? Also, what would help me be less repetitive?
Virginia Kearney (author) from United States on February 14, 2020:
Hi Ella, I wouldn't worry too much about "the" because words like that are not really directly replaceable by another word. What I think you are having a problem with is using "the" with the same noun too often. When that happens, you need to think about other ways to refer to that person, place or thing. For example "the book" could be replaced by the title of the book, or a phrase like "what I'm reading," of "novel" or just "it."
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I´m writing an essay, and we are trying not to be repetitive. What is another word I can use for ¨the¨?
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Virginia Kearney (author) from United States on October 18, 2019:
If you have several things you want to say about the importance of the Inca roads, you can use these sentence starters:
One reason the Inca roads were important is...
A second importance of the roads was...
Thirdly, the roads caused...
Finally, the ultimate significance of the roads was...
Virginia Kearn on October 18, 2019:
Im in school, We are talking about the Inca Roads and I've already talked about Why the roads were important but I dont know how to sart of my sentence with " This is significant because"
By the way im in 5th grade.☺
Virginia Kearney (author) from United States on October 16, 2019:
Hi Madison, you can begin a conclusion with any of the following: in sum, finally, the main point, in conclusion, the most important thing to remember, or obviously.
Madison on October 15, 2019:
How should i start off my conclusion?
Virginia Kearney (author) from United States on October 14, 2019:
Thanks for sharing my website. I have over 100 articles on writing. You can find them by searching on the website or just type the kind of essay you are wirting in Google along with "Owlcation" and VirginiaLynne and you should find what I've written on that topic.
Virginia Kearney (author) from United States on October 14, 2019:
Hi Ali! I have over 100 English writing essays here on Owlcation. You can look at my profile for some of them or search by my name.
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Virginia Kearney (author) from United States on March 28, 2019:
Hi Ariana, I’m glad to hear my article helped. I have 100+ articles on how to write. You can find them by looking at my profile page, owlcation’s home page, or by Googling my name and the topic you need help with.
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Virginia Kearney (author) from United States on July 02, 2018:
Hi Nicole--I have lots of instructions on how to write articles. I'd suggest you start looking at my articles on How to Write an Argument Essay at Owlcation. Google that and you'll find it.
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My son has to write a 500 word essay on violence and the Impact. And yes I've never in my life wrote an essay. So not sure on how to even start nor word it? Can someone please clue me in thanks.
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Virginia Kearney (author) from United States on May 06, 2018:
I think your sentence would work but it is a bit hard to tell out of context of the paragraph. However, I think it would be better if you said:
Until, finally, Lindbergh made it to Paris...
Finally, Lindbergh made it to Paris...
The crowd watched for hours until, finally, Lindbergh made it to Paris.
Don't want to tell you my name.... on May 06, 2018:
Hi Can I say Until finally Lindbergh had made it to Paris?
Virginia Kearney (author) from United States on April 27, 2018:
How about an electrifying (or provocative) gastronomical event? Or
Helen Davies1 on April 27, 2018:
can you recommend an alternative for the words:
sizzling experience (food review)
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Fuat on March 13, 2018:
Thanks so much, Virginia.
Virginia Kearney (author) from United States on March 12, 2018:
Hi Fuat, I now understand your question more clearly. With the added information you give here, I would have to say that "especially" is not a good substitute for "in particular." In a dialogue or quoting someone talking, I think it would be appropriate to use the sentences "I have a number of hobbies. Especially, I like swimming." However, in a formal written document, it is not really the correct form in American English. "In particular, I like swimming" is a correct phrase.
Fuat on March 12, 2018:
Thanks Virginia. And yet in your samples "especially" refers to "in the summer" and "when it is a warm day" respectively, whereas in my example it referred to "swimming". So, again, can it be used in place of "in particular" - as in "I have a number of hobbies. In particular/especially, I like swimming". Thanks in advance.
Virginia Kearney (author) from United States on March 11, 2018:
To make this a good sentence you need something between "especially" and the subject "I." These words would explain the "especially" when or what. Here are some samples:
Especially in the summer, I like swimming.
Especially when it is a very warm day, I like swimming.
Fuat on March 11, 2018:
Thanks a lot, Virginia. So, would a sentence like "Especially I like swimming" be correct?
Virginia Kearney (author) from United States on March 10, 2018:
Hello Fuat, these are words that are intended to help you start your sentences with something other than just the subject. Some of these words work alone and others need to be put into a phrase. "Especially" is one of those sorts of words. Here are some examples:
Especially in the summer, I love to take a walk in the woods.
Especially when my daughter is taking a nap, I enjoy a quiet cup of tea and a good novel.
Especially nice is a hot summer day and a cool dip in our neighbor's pool.
Fuat on March 10, 2018:
Hello, Virginia. Thanks for this undoubtedly useful article. I'd like to clarify something: the title of this material is "sentence starters". Does it mean that the above mentioned words can be used at the beginning of a sentence? e.g. Can I start a sentence with "especially"? Thank you in advance.
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