Easy Ways to Write a Thesis Statement
Explain what you want the reader to think, do, believe or know.
Are usually just one sentence.
Most often come at the end of the first or second paragraph.
May give a roadmap of the rest of the essay.
6 Easy Steps to Write a Thesis
1. Make a Thesis Question
Take your essay topic idea and turn it into a question.
Example: divorce. Thesis Question: How does divorce affect children?
2. Brainstorm Answers
Write down as many ideas as you can think of. You might want to Google search for ideas.
Example: Divorce causes children to feel insecure about the future, not do as well in school, feel insecure in relationships, worry about their parents, become bullies or be bullied, have to get along with a new family of siblings, live a lower standard of income, wonder if they caused the divorce.
3. Pick a Thesis Answer
Look at your brainstorming and decide your main answer.
Example: How does divorce affect children? Divorce causes children to feel insecure.
4. Make a Thesis Road-Map
Now go back to your brainstorming. What are the best reasons for your answer? Try to pick at least three. Add these to your thesis.
Example: How does divorce affect children? Divorce causes children to feel insecure because they often have a lower standard of living after the divorce, they feel less secure in relationships, and they worry about the future.
5. Add Emphasis
Steps 1-4 will make a solid thesis, but if you want to bump it up to the next level you can do two more steps: tell how your view contrasts with other people, and use intensifying transitions like "in reality" or "in fact."
Example Format: Thesis Question. Although (what many people might answer), in reality (your answer) because: (your three or more reasons).
How does divorce affect children? Although some people argue that children quickly get over a parent's split, in reality, divorce causes children to feel insecure for a long time afterwards because they often have a lower standard of living after the divorce, they feel less secure in relationships, and they worry about the future.
Making Your Thesis Sentence
What other people think
thesis/what you think
: list of 3 or more topic ideas
, in reality
the reason is...
because: 3 or more reasons
Some people think
, the truth is
the cause is...
: 3 or more causes
, I believe
that ____ is...
:3 or more aspects
, in fact
what happens is...
: 3 or more steps
What is the history of
Most people assume
the sequence was...
: 3 or more parts
How can we solve
Previously people have tried
,however, I suggest
the best solution is...
because: 3 or more reasons
5 Thesis Sentence Examples
Use the chart above to make your own thesis statements. You can mix and match the different columns. Here are a variety of examples for different kinds of essays:
Cause: Why are Americans rapidly becoming more obese? Some people think that the cause of rising obesity is lack of individual self-control; however, the truth is that the growing waistlines are caused by corporations that secretly add sugar to make foods more addictive; technology which has made people less active, and more tied to their work; and portions sizes in restaurants, which have ingrained overeating into our habits.
Evaluation: Does Recycling make a difference? Although, indeed, one person's recycling may not make much of a difference, in fact, when all of us join together, we can make a difference because when we all recycle: less waste goes into landfills, reusing things becomes more natural, and people get into better habits.
Explaining: How does playing a sport affect young people? Most people would say that learning how to play is the most important thing children get from a sport. In fact, children who play sports gain even more from learning about teamwork, realizing they must overcome defeat, and accepting their own place on a team.
Argument: Should parents be concerned if their children are obsessed with horror movies? Although many people scoff at the idea of movies as really influencing our behavior, in reality, parents need to be concerned about what their children are watching because children often can't tell truth from fiction, violent images desensitize us to real violence, and kids who watch violence obsessively may be exhibiting signs of deeper emotional problems.
Expository: Is there only one way to write a great thesis statement? Although this article might make you think that there is only one perfect thesis statement method, in fact, you can write good thesis statements in several different ways; however, by following the method described here you will learn an easy way to write a complex thesis idea that will not only impress your instructor but will also help you to write your essay easily.
Using One Topic to Write 8 Questions
Here is a sample of the different kinds of essay questions you can come up with using the topic of "Horror Movies."
Explaining: What are the characteristics of a classic horror movie?
History of: How have horror movie plots, settings and characters changed over time?
Cause/Effect: What causes people to enjoy watching horror movies?
Description: What classifies a movie as a "horror" movie?
How to: How can you learn to like horror movies?
Propose a Solution: Should parents worry about the violence in horror movies?
Evaluate: What is the best horror movie of all time?
Argument: Do horror movies cause some people to act out the violence they watch?
Using a Semicolon to Write a More Complex Sentence
Using a semicolon in your thesis statement can help you because:
- You can write a more complicated, longer thesis.
- The semicolon makes the thesis statement stand out for your reader.
- Using a semicolon and transition word lets you how ideas relate (contrast "however" or adding "moreover").
How can you use the semicolon?
- Combine 2 sentences and use a semicolon instead of a period (the two sentences must be related to one another)
Example: I agree with Stephen King that horror movies are popular; I disagree that people who watch them will be less violent.
- Combine 2 sentences and use a transition word which explains how the two sentences are related.
Sentence; transition, sentence
Example: I agree with Stephen King that horror movies are very popular; however, I disagree that watching them keeps people from doing violence.
Using Colons in Lists
Using a colon (:) before your list helps you to make that list clearer.
Example: I think that prolonged looking at violence is dangerous because watching violence: causes people to be desensitized to real violence; makes some teens desire to imitate the violence, or ignore the violence of others; and leaves the viewer wanting even more, and bloodier special effects in the next film.
Parallel form: In a list, be careful that all of the phrases are in the same form. How to check?
- Check the first word of each item. In the example above, each phrase starts with the same sort of word: causes, makes, and leaves.
- Can you finish the sentence with any one of the items? Try doing the last word before the colon with each phrase.
- watching violence causes people to be desensitized...
- watching violence makes some teens desire...
- watching violence leave the view wanting even more...
Questions & Answers
What do you think of, "what is the effect of addiction to online gaming?" for a thesis?
Other questions on this topic could be:
1. Is online gaming addictive?
2. When is a gaming addiction destructive?
3. Can online gaming train people to deal with real-world problems?Helpful 25
What do you think of, "How many generations of families are in jail and why?" for a thesis question?
A thesis question needs to have a clearer and broader answer. Here are some better ones:
1. What causes people to have generational poverty?
2. Why do some families have many members who become incarcerated?
3. How can we prevent generational incarceration?
4. Are children of parents who are incarcerated more likely to go to prison themselves?
5. How are poverty and incarceration related?
6. How can we prevent people released from prison from returning?Helpful 4
"Was Shi Huang Di brilliant or brutal?" How can I develop this into a thesis statement?
Your question is about the first emperor of China, who is also called Qin Shi Huang. He is generally credited with unifying China to start the first dynasty (Qin dynasty) as well as starting the project of The Great Wall and ordering the creation of the Terracotta Warriors for his burial. Your question is interesting but a better way to word it to create a good thesis question would be to leave the question more open-ended:
1. How should we evaluate the life and works of Shi Huang Di?
2. Is the legacy of Shi Huang Di something the Chinese people should admire?Helpful 3
How do I write about the difference between American and Filipino desserts or snacks? What I want to say that the difference is that Filipino snacks or desserts do not use as much sugar.
Combine your ideas into one good comparison and contrast sentence. For example, you could say, "American and Filipino desserts are both delicious, but Filipino snacks and desserts do not use as much sugar or contain as many ingredients as American treats."Helpful 16
How can I use the question "Why is chocolate important?" as a topic for a thesis statement?
Your question would be better if you narrowed it to explain what kind of importance you are talking about. Here are some ideas:
1. Why is chocolate so important to me?
2. Why is chocolate production so important in (choose a country)?
3. Why is chocolate so important that people choose it as their favorite flavor?
4. Why is chocolate so important in a healthy diet?
5. Why is chocolate the favorite flavor of many people?Helpful 10