Punctuation Rules for Conversation Quotation With Examples

Updated on June 30, 2017
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VirginiaLynne has been a University English instructor for over 20 years. She specializes in helping people write essays faster and easier.

The Goal in Punctuating

When you write a conversation, your most important goal is making sure your reader understands who is talking. The following rules are easy to follow and will make sure that your reader doesn't have to backtrack in the story (isn't that annoying?) to find out who said what!

6 Punctuation Rules

1. Indent each time a new person speaks.

2. Make it clear who is speaking.

3. Quotation marks only around speech.

4. Same speaker? No new paragraph.

5. Use Variety

6. Long quotations are special.

Use Emotional Words for "Said"

"Do you understand soldier!" hollered the captain. "Yes, sir!" retorted the recruit.
"Do you understand soldier!" hollered the captain. "Yes, sir!" retorted the recruit. | Source

1. Indent Each Time a New Person Speaks

This rule trips up many of my students. Every time a new person is speaking, you need to start a new paragraph and indent. Remember:

  • If the person only speaks a word or short phrase, you still need to indent.
  • Include any description which accompanies the action of that person in the paragraph with that quote.

Here is an example:

George said, "Jane, did you hear that noise last night?" George nudged her when she didn't respond.

"Hear what?" asked Jane, "You mean your snoring?"

George glared at her, "How could I have heard it if I was asleep snoring? You always think everything bad is my fault!"

Jane knew she was grumpy because she hadn't slept well and she wished George would agree to go to the sleep center to be tested for sleep apnea, but she didn't feel like getting into a fight right now. Softly, she touched his arm. "I'm sorry, George," she said. "What do you think you heard?"

Giving her a peck on the cheek, George ruefully grinned, "You're probably right. I must have woken myself up. Where's the number for that sleep doctor?"

Why indent? It helps the reader to follow the conversation and know when a new person is speaking. In a movie or real conversation, the visual and audio clues easily let us know when a new person is talking. In writing, you use punctuation and formatting instead.

In the above example, the name of the person was used in each paragraph; however, sometimes, when the dialogue is fast, you may omit the names of the speakers in short sentences. By indenting each line, the reader can still know who is speaking.

2. Make it Clear Who is Speaking

There isn't a firm rule about how many times you need to say the name of the speaker. Instead, the rule is that your reader shouldn't get confused and have to re-read. If are doing a short dialogue with just two people, say their names every 5-6 sentences or so.

Here is an example:

"Are you awake, George?" asked Jane.

"What?"

"I said, are you awake?

"I am now."

"What does that mean?"

"It means, you woke me up!" muttered George angrily, turning over in bed and uttering a very loud sigh.

"Oh."

"So, what do you want?" he sputtered.

"Nothing," said Jane, turning over and pulling the covers over her head. "Go back to sleep."

"You drive me crazy!"

Words Can Speak a Thousand Pictures

Be sure to use vivid adjectives and words for said to picture the conversation for the reader.
Be sure to use vivid adjectives and words for said to picture the conversation for the reader. | Source

3. Quotation Marks Only Around Speech

Quotation marks show two things:

  1. Someone is starting to speak.
  2. Someone is stopping speaking.

Therefore, when you use quotation marks, be sure to put them right before the words someone says and right afterwards. You never include the name of the person speaking inside the quotation marks (as I have 1-2 students do each year). Here is an example:

Incorrect: "George said I will pick up the laundry today on the way home from work."

"Great, then I will get us some Chinese take-out for dinner, Sally replied."

Correct: George said, " I will pick up the laundry today on the way home from work."

"Great, Then I will get us some Chinese take-out for dinner," Sally replied.

4. Same Speaker? No New Paragraph

Sometimes, a lot of description or other information might come in between the words someone is speaking. In that case, you need to remember:

  1. Quotation marks go around speech starting and stopping.
  2. If same person is speaking, you don't need to start a new paragraph.

Here is an example with the dialogue underlined:

Steve, my husband's French cousin, had an unusual haircut: rounded in front, sticking up on top, and short all over. "Obviously French," said my husband, "very sophisticated, very cool." I was somewhat less impressed, but I could tell my husband was thinking about asking me to cut his hair that way. Finally, he confessed, "I was going to ask you to cut my hair like Steve's, because I thought it might make me look at bit more debonair. I've changed my mind though, after his sister told me that their mother cuts his hair and everyone at school makes fun of him."

"Oh . . . uh, sorry," I said. I'd been trying to imagine what my husband would look like with a brown bowl on his head. "Guess even the French like to save money."

5. Use Variety for "Said"

There is nothing more boring than dialogue that always uses "he said" and "she said" or conversations that always put the speaker first. That kind of sentence writing only works for beginning reader books. Here is how you make your dialogue sound sophisticated and professional:

1. Use Variety in Where You Put Speaker. Making your dialogue pop means using variety. First of all, you can vary where you put the speaker. You can put this information at the beginning, middle or end of a sentence. Examples:

  • The beginning of the sentence:

Finally, he confessed, "I was going to ask you to cut my hair like Steve's because I thought it might make me look at a bit more debonair. I've changed my mind, however, after his sister told me that their mother cuts his hair and everyone at school makes fun of him."

  • The end of the sentence:

"Oh . . . uh, sorry," I said.

  • In the middle:

"Obviously French," said my husband, "very sophisticated, very cool."

2. Use Variety in words used for "said." Another important way that you can make great dialogue is to use many different words for said that give the emotion of the person.

3. Use Intensifying Words: You can also add adverbs (ly words) like "surprisingly," "quickly" and "seriously" to intensify that emotion. See the charts below for examples of words for said and adverbs.

Words for Said

said
happy words
question words
angry words
sad words
told
whispered
asked
demanded
cried
reminded
laughed
replied
yelled
lamented
interrupted
joked
queried
ordered
groaned
explained
giggled
argued
thundered
rembled
spoke
jested
answered
fumed
stammered
stated
chatted
responded
screamed
shuddered

Adjectives for Conversation: How Something is Spoken

cautiously said
boastfully said
emotionally said
how it is said
carefully
accusingly
gigglingly
softly
doubtfully
commandingly
laughingly
loudly
apologetically
smirkingly
sobbingly
gently
coaxingly
rantingly
cheerfully
dramatically
confidingly
sassily
pleadingly
encouragingly
speculatively
scoffingly
compassionately
wonderingly

6. Long Quotations are Special

Ok, I know everyone wants to be special but long quotations really are special and here are a few punctuation tips:

Use regular paragraph format for long quotes. Unlike quoting a literary or news source, when you are using conversation, you do not have to indent on the right-hand side for a long quote.You just use the regular paragraph format.

Use quotation marks only for the start and end of the quote. Normally, you will have many shorter quotations with a description in between. However, sometimes you may have a person speaking without interruption for a long time as they are telling a story. The way you punctuate this is different. If a person speaks for more than one paragraph you:

  • Put quotation marks before their first word.
  • Don't put a quotation mark at the end of that paragraph if they are still speaking without interruption in the next paragraph.
  • Instead, put quotation marks at the start of the next paragraph to indicate they are still speaking.
  • Put an ending quotation mark when they stop speaking.

My Grandfather pulled on a blade of grass and said, "Did I ever tell you about your Mom when she was little ? xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx (continue on for whole paragraph, there is no quotation mark at end).

"She was so funny when she was in the third grade. After school one day, xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx (finish paragraph but still no ending quotation marks).

"At her wedding, I thought I was going to cry because I loved her so much. But your Grandma cried so much that I laughed instead." Big tears rolled down his face now as he remembered that day.

Notice the ending quotation marks after "instead." The "Big tears..." sentence is a description, so there aren't any quotation marks around it.

Effective Conversation Writing

Improve your writing of dialogue by adding adjectives to explain how a person says something. Any of the words for said can be changed and made more interesting by adding one of the adjectives on the list. By changing the words around, you can make the same sentence have completely different meanings. Check out the amazing change adjectives and different words for said makes in these sentences:

Jason said, "Where are you going right now?"

"Where are you going right now?" demanded Jason.

Compassionately, Jason asked, "Where are you going right now?

Jason sobbingly cried, "Where are you going right now?"

Jason happily asked, "Where are you going right now?"

"Where," Jason abruptly interrupted, "Are you going right now?"

Use these word lists to give it a try in your own conversations and dialogues!

Tips for Writing Conversation

1. Put quotation marks around what is actually said.

2. Punctuation of conversation needs to help the reader "see" the conversation and know who is speaking when.

3. You don't need to say the name of the person speaking every time but say it often enough that the reader is reminded who it is.

4. If more than two people are speaking, you may need to tell the reader who is talking more often.

5. Let someone else read the dialogue and mark who is speaking if you aren't sure it is clear.

Remember that children often talk in short sentences.  Be sure the vocabulary you write is appropriate for the child's age.
Remember that children often talk in short sentences. Be sure the vocabulary you write is appropriate for the child's age. | Source

Look At Professional Writing

My final tip? If you ever encounter a punctuation problem you don't know how to solve, your best resource is pulling out a novel and looking through it for conversation which is like the kind you are doing. Choose a recent novel with a lot of dialogue for the best help. Copy editors make sure that the standards of punctuation are done correctly in printed work, so following the rules you see in a novel should make sure you are doing things correctly.

Questions & Answers

  • Do I put quotations around the words that I am speaking in a story?

    If you are speaking out loud to someone and using something like, "I said," you will use quotes. However, you can convey conversation without quotation marks. Here is an example of a dialogue which uses some different ways to convey the information:

    Jennifer told me she was tired of seeing my bright blue shoes every day.

    I said, "I don't make enough money to buy a new pair!"

    Laughing, she said, "Well, why did you choose that color in the first place?"

    Looking at the grey and black shoes she always wore, I thought that I could have asked her that same question, but I decided it wasn't worth stirring up trouble. "I guess I just don't have your good taste," I smirked.

  • How do you know when to use quotation?

    You use quotation to show when someone is speaking. Sometimes, you can use it when you are thinking something. Here are some examples:

    John said, "I think I will go get some candy at the store."

    I looked at him after he shut the door and thought, "I wish I had enough money to get some candy too."

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      Tewogbade 

      5 weeks ago

      Am from Nigeria, I hope to have successful examination. thanks very much.

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      Virginia Kearney 

      2 months ago from United States

      Hi Aaron, I think you have brought up a very interesting point, and that is the fact that in conversation people don't always talk in "correct English" and you are trying to put some punctuation to show that the person pauses after "because." However, it is true that the comma isn't really correct in this instance. However, I have a solution that would work. Another way to indicate a pause is to either put the reference to who is speaking in between the "because" and the rest of the sentence, or to use an ellipsis (...). Here is a sample:

      "Because...God was ready for them to be with him," David said softly.

      "Because," the man replied in a condescending manner, "tomorrow may..."

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      Aaron Poole 

      2 months ago

      I know "because" isn't supposed to ever get a comma and people frown on starting a sentence with it, but I have several instances in dialogue writing where someone is answering a question. It looks better and sounds better with a comma after "Because".

      Examples:

      "But why did they go so soon?" young Robert asked tearful.

      "Because, God was ready for them to be with him," David said softly.

      "Why tomorrow? Why not tonight?" she asked emphatically.

      The man replied in a condescending manner, "Because, tomorrow may be a new chapter in both of your lives. That is what you want, isn't it?"

      I know I can change the sentence, but I don't want to. It sounds more natural. Anyway, I was just wondering about it? I can't seem to find anything on this particular problem. Thanks!

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      Virginia Kearney 

      2 months ago from United States

      Hi George, When the person who is speaking quotes someone else, you use single quotation marks. Here is an example:

      "Don't get angry!" I told him, "As my mother always told me, 'You catch more flies with honey than vinegar.'"

      Notice that the end of that sentence has a period, a single quote (to end the quotation from the mother) and then the double quotation mark to show the end of the person speaking. There are more examples in my other comments and questions.

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      George Jenkins 

      2 months ago

      Is it correct to use quotation marks in a conversation within a conversation as the story is related to a third party

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      Sophie Dahlia 

      2 months ago

      Hi Virginia,

      Thank you so much for getting back to me, this has made a very great improvement for my short story; you give great advice. I wish to be as great of a writer as you one day.

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      Nuhu Abdullahi 

      2 months ago

      I just recently took up writing on wattpad. I had a lot of stories on my mind I've wanted to put to paper. I was met with a snag, punctuation, i got nervous, thinking i was doing it wrongly. I figured that out. Then i was met with another issue, quotations, for my third chapter involved a lot of talking, to explain the events of the prior chapter. I googled and searched an researched until I came across your page. I do not know how to thank you enough. I mean you answered every burning question i had, and even some more stuff i didn't know i needed to know.... Thank You. Please keep this up.

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      Virginia Kearney 

      3 months ago from United States

      Hi Sophie, When you quote something inside of another quote you use single quotation marks. However, it is also important that you make the meaning clear. Here is how I would write your example:

      I told him, "she was blonde and had glittering brown eyes that were like the bark of a tree just after sunrise. She giggled at me and said, 'hurry mummy!"

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      Sophie Dahlia 

      3 months ago

      Hi,

      I am writing a short piece of writing for my English class and I wanted to know what punctuation I needed to use if my protagonist was describing to another person what someone else said or should I merely close the protagonist's speech and open new speech marks for the person.

      Example:

      "She was blonde and had glittering brown eyes that were the bark of a tree just after sunrise. She giggled at me (Hurry mummy!)..."

      Or

      "She was blonde and had glittering brown eyes that were the bark of a tree just after sunrise," I explain.

      She giggled at me "Hurry mummy!"

      -- However, the second option, whether plausible or not, forces me to change the tense after the protagonist's words as her's are in the present tense and she is saying to another person that her daughter said "Hurry mummy" to her. So I am not sure what to use for my short story as the child isn't present nor would it work if she was because, well it's a little complicated and it doesn't really matter.

      Any advice you could give me would be most welcome :)

      --- Sophie

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      Virginia Kearney 

      3 months ago from United States

      Hi Jonathan, you definitely would want the letter to be written in the first person. Many novels have a variety of perspectives and readers are actually very good at switching between perspectives as long as you are careful to set it up so that they know whose perspective they should take. You are asking some good questions.

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      Jonathan 

      3 months ago

      Hi Virginia,

      I have another question for you :) Hope you can help me.

      In my novel that is written entirely in third person I have a character give a letter to the main protagonist. In the letter a character is telling her personal story and what happened to them out of her perspective. Is it okay then if the letter is in first person? If you understand what I am trying to say.

      Warm Regards

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      Jonathan 

      3 months ago

      Your the best! Thank you so very much.

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      Virginia Kearney 

      3 months ago from United States

      Hi Jonathan--congratulations for working on such a big project. It is quite correct to have long quotations without having to interrupt with "he said" and "she said." In fact, if a character continues to talk in more than one paragraph there is a convention for that. You would use a quotation mark before the first word of each paragraph the person is speaking but no ending quotation mark at the end of a paragraph if the next paragraph is continuing dialog. In fact, you don't need to use "he said" and "she said" in every sentence of a short exchange either. You do need to put who is speaking at the beginning of the dialog, of course, but as long as the words that are said are clearly back and forth and the reader can tell who is saying what, you don't need to repeatedly remind the reader about who is talking. The main rule is that you want it easy for the reader to figure out who is saying what. You never want a reader to have to go back and figure that out (ever been irritated by having to do that when reading a novel? I have!). If you are in doubt, ask several people to read your dialogue and see if they get confused. Another hint is that you can use small pieces of description to keep the reader on track, as well as to fill out the emotions being played out while the people are speaking by using descriptive details. Here are some samples: she flung her hands in the air...; turning to watch his reaction, she commented...; Walking away, he heard the shout...

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      Jonathan 

      3 months ago

      Hi Virginia,

      I am writing a novel with a lot of scientific explanations and was wondering if having longer quoted dialogue would be acceptable.

      A character is explaining this to another, while sitting around a fire.

      exp.

      "I'm dying," Eli's words sounded cold and distant.

      "What?! Eli, what do you mean?" Gage responded with shock.

      "The day Marianne brought in Rose, She brought the virus in with her. She never told anyone, but we soon found out we were all infected. The first five months of being in here, we only worked on a suppressant. We found a formula with Marianne's help but the formula damages one's internal organs after prolonged use."

      Its just a rough format. I just want to know how you would brake up a long explanation without repeating words like: He said etc.

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      Virginia Kearney 

      4 months ago from United States

      David, you have an excellent question. Your second example is correct. However, if you interrupt the stream of the conversation with some description or mention of who is talking, it might require quotation marks. Here is an example:

      "Stop that you twit!" yelled Roberto. "Do you want to hurt yourself?" Walking off in a huff, he muttered, "Sometimes people just don't learn."

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      David 

      4 months ago

      Hi!

      Excellent read and advice here.

      How do you deal with several sentences in succession by the same character? Do you open new quotes each time?

      Roberto retorted, "Stop that you twit!" "Do you want to hurt yourself?"

      or should it be;

      Roberto retorted, "Stop that you twit! Do you want to hurt yourself?"

      Thanks!

      David

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      Audrey Hunt 

      5 months ago from Idyllwild Ca.

      You're an exceptional teacher. I thank you for the examples of correct and incorrect punctuation. I like using adjectives in my writing and I'm relieved to know it's okay to do so.

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      Virginia Kearney 

      6 months ago from United States

      Hi Shelley, in your example both of the quotations should be indented and so should the third sentence. However, I think this sort of dialogue is more effective if some sort of action is included which links the two and tells who is speaking. Here is my re-write:

      Sam glanced at his mother. Hesitatingly, he asked, "Mom, how are you today?"

      "I'm okay."

      Her answer satisfied Sam. He smiled.

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      Shelley 

      6 months ago

      This is very helpful, but I have a question if I have dialogue between two people for example:

      “Mom, how are you today?"

      "I'm okay."

      Sam smiled and was glad his mom was okay.

      Should Sam's action be indented also or added to after the mom answers?

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      Chris 

      6 months ago

      Virginia, thank you for the reply.

      You spoke of using past tense and I'll admit this has always been difficult for me. Granted its been a while since I was in school taking English/Composition classes, but I have always thought or been under the impression that when something 'is' happening, the tenses should always match and be 'in' the present? I know MS-Word is constantly pointing out problems with tense and passive sentences, but they seem more reader friendly (if that's a term).

      Are you suggesting that in a scene that 'is' transpiring and not being recalled later; it is alright to use differing tenses...the various characters using said (and it's variations) and others using says (and it's variations)?

      Example using your previous example...

      "...we can still do it now," finished Trent. *

      "What?!" the friends exclaim together **

      Sighing after their exclamation, Jason adds, "What about our moms?"

      *Couple questions on your example...was the elimination of the comma an accident, or is it no longer required? While the preceding conversation isn't present and might make a difference, 'finished Trent.' - it sounds or feels wrong.

      **Where the previous sentence used past tense, this one and the next uses present tense (seems appropriate as the speaker is the same);though I did add a feeling of emotion in the third (separate) sentence which makes splitting the originally posted sentence in two. Secondly, maybe I'm nitpicking, does it matter whether the ! comes before or after the ? - where in the example it is both a question and an exclamation of shock? I know there is a character that uses the two combined, but not sure how often it is used and or accepted.

      Well, again thanks for your reply and hope you have a safe and Merry Christmas

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      Virginia Kearney 

      6 months ago from United States

      Hi Chris--I'm so glad to hear you are writing for your own enjoyment and pleasure. I'll give you a couple of other tips. It would work better to write in the past tense usually (said, exclaimed), rather than present tense (says, exclaims). Secondly, use adverbs (words that tell how the verb is said) and adjectives (describing nouns) more often to make your writing more vivid. You may do that and just didn't add them on your examples. Here is the answer:

      "..we can still do it now" finished Trent.

      "What?!" exclaimed the friends together.

      Jason added, "What about our moms?"

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      Virginia Kearney 

      6 months ago from United States

      Hi Chris--You have a good question and dialogue can become very difficult to do well when there are many different people. However, technically, in the first example, Roger is saying both of the quotes and looking at Trent shaking his head. Unless you point out Trent is saying the sentence, Roger is still speaking. How about this:

      “Oh…didn’t think of that,” Roger says, looking at Trent.

      Shaking his head, Trent admitted, "I didn't either."

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      Chris 

      6 months ago

      Me again, I'd like to ask one more thing...same scene...

      What about when two speak at the same time but only one continues?

      "...we can still do it now," Trent finishes.

      "WHAT?!" the friends exclaim as Jason carries on, "What about our moms?"

      To me it seems messy to have separate lines indicating both boys are speaking and then a third one to ask the question.

      Thanks

      PS...none of this is for essays, school work or publishing...it is stuff I write for my own enjoyment and few will ever read. That doesn't mean I don't try to stay within standard grammatical conventions.

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      Chris 

      6 months ago

      For the most part I agree with your entire list, but it was the following sentence I wrote that made me question #1 and do a search:

      “Oh…didn’t think of that,” Roger says as he looks at Trent who is shaking his head, “I didn’t either.”

      To me it seems quite clear that the second speaker is Trent.

      This in a scene where there are 4 people involved and there is/will be a lot of dialogue between the two sets of people and the individuals themselves. The above is the two dads after replying to their sons about an upcoming school project while the mom's are away.

      A lot of the stories I write for myself tend to have a lot of dialog and in some circumstances like the above it seems a lot simpler, even cleaner to show two people in the same sentence rather than:

      “Oh…didn’t think of that,” Roger says when he looks at Brad's father.

      Shaking his head, Brent turns his attention to Jason's father, “I didn’t either.”

      Previously it was already indicated that Trent is Brad's father and Roger is Jason's.

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      Virginia Kearney 

      7 months ago from United States

      Hi Jack, you have a good question. The first one is correct in this particular instance. "This is a quote" becomes the subject of the sentence and there is never a comma between a subject and a verb (is). Since "this is a quote" becomes the subject, the problem with the last sentence is that by separating the quotation with a period, you leave the second sentence without a subject. Secondly, it is not correct to have words with quotations around them as a sentence unless it is part of a dialogue in a conversation which at some other point tells you who says those words

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      Jack 

      7 months ago

      Hi, a problem I've had for a while and never found an answer to is how to punctuate the end of a quote used like this:

      "This is a quote" is a quote used in this sentence.

      or:

      "This is a quote," is a quote used in this sentence.

      or:

      "This is a quote." Is a quote used in this sentence.

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      Virginia Kearney 

      7 months ago from United States

      RTalloni--I have to look these rules up myself sometimes! I tell my students that they just need to know when they need to check on a rule.

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      RTalloni 

      7 months ago from the short journey

      As always, well done and useful. I think Ive finally gotten a real grip on number 6. :)

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      Virginia Kearney 

      7 months ago from United States

      So glad this was helpful Rita. I have lots of other ideas for writers. I hope you will check them out!

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      Rita 

      7 months ago

      Thank you for this posting. It has helped me out a lot since it's been years since I last been able to relax with a good book or write anything lately. I really appreciate it!

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      Virginia Kearney 

      7 months ago from United States

      You probably would keep this sentence in the last paragraph where someone spoke. However, if you want to emphasize the idea that there was unresolved tension and create a written "pause" in the story, you might make this as another paragraph.

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      Unknown 

      7 months ago

      Then they both walked away.

      Do you make a new paragraph for this?

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      Virginia Kearney 

      8 months ago from United States

      Thanks Ron! I will have to fix that. As you can tell, I have no military background and I appreciate you taking the time to look so carefully at the photo.

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      Ron Bergeron 

      8 months ago from Massachusetts, US

      Good article, but I have to comment on the caption under the first picture - "Do you understand soldier!" hollered the captain.

      First, that's not a captain. That's a Marine Corps Staff Sergeant as shown by the rank insignia on his collar. Based on the black belt he's wearing, he appears to be a Senior Drill Instructor.

      Second, the person pictured would never use the word "soldier" when addressing a Marine Corps recruit. He would use "recruit", "Private", or a number of other terms that would certainly not be permitted on this site.

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      Virginia Kearney 

      13 months ago from United States

      You can, but I'm a bit confused by the "A." Do you mean:

      "Are you going to sleep yet?" asked Jane.

      or

      "Are you going to sleep yet?" Amy asked Jane.

      Both of those would be correct. Any punctuation that is included in the words spoken or quoted would remain the same. There is still a period at the end if there is some part of the sentence which is not in quotation marks. Here are some samples:

      James questioned, "Are we there yet?" which just irritated his already tired father.

      His sister retorted, "You just asked that two minutes ago!" as everyone in the car gave a big sigh.

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      No name 

      13 months ago

      Can you write it like this,

      "Are you going to sleep yet?" A asked Jane.

      It has a question mark in the sentence Jane is speaking in but then there is a period at the end

      Can you write one like that?

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      Virginia Kearney 

      14 months ago from United States

      Hi, Arielle--What a great question. I will have to add a section on this to my article. The answer is that you would use regular ("quotes") for the conversation between the first two people. Then, for the dialogue that is inside the story, you would use single quotes ('quote'). If you end your sentence with the person quoting the other person, you actually have three marks ('").

      Here is a sample:

      James told John, "I was talking with my English teacher yesterday and she asked, 'Are you taking my class next semester?'"

      "That's awkward," John replied, "I thought you didn't think she liked you. Isn't she the teacher who told you, 'Your sentences are about as successful as my attempt to serve broccoli to my teenagers?"

      "Yes," groaned James, "she then proceeded to tell me a story. She told me, 'When I was in school....'"

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      Arielle 

      14 months ago

      Hello. These tips were helpful, thank you. I am still puzzled about the circumstance where there are two people having a conversation, and then one person tells a story to the other person involving a dialogue between two people. For the story within the dialogue between the 2 people, would I use regular quotes? Or single?

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      Emily Wagers 

      18 months ago

      I am in your 1304 11:00 TR class and I am not sure how I made it through English in High School or my first English course at Baylor without knowing these tips. It was very helpful!!

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      Denzel Mims 

      18 months ago

      This was a very helpful essay, I will use these tips when i am writing.

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      Jacqui 

      2 years ago from New Zealand

      Well, this has just made my life so much easier - particularly when I've got a slightly long winded scene for a reasonably short of words character - now I can make it make sense to the reader.

      Have saved this to my favourites. Thanks for sharing this information.

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      Shade1 

      4 years ago

      Thanks for the reply,this was exactly the same thing which i feel sometimes about Grr Martin's writing.

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      Virginia Kearney 

      4 years ago from United States

      Interesting question Shade. Without looking at the full passage, I can't give a definitive answer but my guess is that the writer started a new paragraph because there is a shift in subject. However, in that case they should have done a "speaker tag" to clarify who is talking. Rather than hard and fast rules in this sort of situation, I suggest that the guideline for the writer should always be to make it easy for the reader to follow the speakers. If a reader has to re-read, you've not written clearly. On the other hand, writers don't want to be too obtrusive with speaker tags so that their craft overshadows the story. Still, clarity is, in my mind, the most important goal. Thanks for the comment.

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      Shade1 

      4 years ago

      Great article,i stumbled upon it online when i was searching for dialogue punctuation articles.I have been reading books for a very long time and of late i am finding many errors in books.I recently read GRR Martin's a clash of kings.On page 242 the character Tyrion finishes his dialogue followed by a narrative sentence and then another paragraph has been started with him speaking.I was confused about who was speaking since either no closing quotation marks should have been there or a new paragraph should not have been started.It goes like this

      "I'll make...".Whether truly...

      ...........uses.

      "See that... Joffrey."

      Now is this an error or just that the end quotation mark in the 1st para was there because it was followed by a narrative sentence??

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      Virginia Kearney 

      4 years ago from United States

      Terrific! I'm always so pleased when my articles are helpful to someone in their classes.

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      Guest 

      4 years ago

      Thank you for the help, this brought my English grade up to an A!

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      joshphilip 

      5 years ago

      I didn't know those rules for conversation and do tend to struggle with dialogue in my writing. I'll make sure to do this from now on. Thanks for the tips!

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      unknown 

      6 years ago

      it helped a lot. thanks!^^

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      raxit02 

      7 years ago from Amsterdam, The Netherlands

      Yes, this article has been helpful in understanding the requirements. As I am not a native English-speaker, I often do a list of mistakes. Writing here is helping me extensively.

      Thank you for sharing these meaningful insights.

      Take care,

      Nick

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      Virginia Kearney 

      7 years ago from United States

      Just a reminder that I need to proofread one last time before publishing. Thanks for catching my error so I could correct it!

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      THAT Mary Ann 

      7 years ago

      I believe it is,

      "The 'Big tears...' sentence is description, so there aren't any quotation marks around it."

      as long as we are being grammatical...

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