"The Cold Earth Slept Below" by the Romantic Poet Percy Bysshe Shelley [1792-1822]. Analysis and Context
...a respectable female, far advanced in pregnancy, was taken out of the Serpentine River and brought to her residence in Queen Street, Brompton, having been missing for nearly six weeks. She had a valuable ring on her finger...— London Times, December 12, 1816
The cold earth slept below;
Above the cold sky shone;
And all around,
With a chilling sound,
From caves of ice and fields of snow
The breath of night like death did flow
Beneath the sinking moon.
The wintry hedge was black;
The green grass was not seen;
The birds did rest
On the bare thorn’s breast,
Whose roots, beside the pathway track,
Had bound their folds o’er many a crack
Which the frost had made between.
Thine eyes glow’d in the glare
Of the moon’s dying light;
As a fen-fire’s beam
On a sluggish stream
Gleams dimly—so the moon shone there,
And it yellow’d the strings of thy tangled hair,
That shook in the wind of night.
The moon made thy lips pale, beloved;
The wind made thy bosom chill;
The night did shed
On thy dear head
Its frozen dew, and thou didst lie
Where the bitter breath of the naked sky
Might visit thee at will
A Summary of “The Cold Earth Slept Below”
The tone of this poem might be described as in the style of gothic horror, in which death and fear are predominant themes. The pace and stressed words in the poem add to the uncanny impression that the poem elicits in the reader.
In an age when the concept of the sublime was an important aspect of the imaginative work of many writers, Shelley, one the foremost Romantic poets, developed a reputation as a poet of extreme landscapes.
Definition - the sublime elicits from the observer of landscapes, or sometimes, situations, a state of awareness that incorporates fear, admiration, and awe.
These features of the sublime are prominent in The Cold Earth Slept Below
- The first stanza describes extreme cold (note the repetition of the word cold in the first two lines) in terms of caves of ice, fields of snow, chilling sound and death. In this desolate landscape, even the moon is sinking
- The second stanza expands the description of a bleak landscape - the hedge is black, a colour connected with mourning - it is night-time and because it is winter the hedge is stripped of its foliage exposing the bare branches, which are devoid of life - the birds did not rest. Not only are the branches of the hedge bare, the roots are too. The frost had caused numerous cracks in the pathway and the roots of the thorn hedge had crept over and into them - further imagery of life sinking into the ground.
- The third stanza moves on from the description of the landscape in the previous two stanzas to a direct address by the voice in the poem to a creature - it is not revealed at this point if the creature is human or an animal. But the creature has eyes that glow in the dying light of the moon. Shelley presents a metaphor of the glowing eyes resembling a fen-fire (will o' the wisp) - an unexplained ghostly light seen by travellers, usually over bogland or fens, at night. Such phenomena were reputed to draw travellers towards certain death in the water.
- The fourth stanza continues the direct address to the object of the poem. It is now clear that this is a dead woman - her lips pale, her bosom chill, lying on the ground under a bitterly cold sky. It is evident that this is not an impersonal description - the voice addresses the deceased as beloved.
To summarize, a beloved woman has been out of doors on a bitterly cold winter night and has died of exposure or perhaps, as the allusion to a fen-fire suggests, has drowned as a consequence of being drawn to an inexplicable, possibly paranormal, phenomenon.
The Form and Poetic Features of 'The Cold Earth Slept Below'
- Four six-line stanzas known as sextains
- The rhyme scheme is not consistent throughout the poem but there is a discernable pattern, providing cohesion.
- Lines 3 and 4 in each stanza are the shortest lines in the poem and in each of the verses the two lines rhyme - around, sound, rest, breast, beam, stream, shed, head.
- The rhyme of stanzas 1 and 2, reading each stanza as a unit independent of the other in terms of rhyme, is - ABCCDDE and ABCCDDB
- The rhyme scheme of stanzas 2 and 3 is ABCCBBA and ABCCBBA
- Note the alliteration that abounds throughout the poem ( alliteration is a stylistic device in which a number of words, having the same first consonant sound, occur close together in a series. e.g. line 9 The green grass was not seen contains both alliteration and internal rhyme)
- A significant feature of this poem is the imagery, which is a poetic device used to defamiliarise the familiar. Here it is achieved by the personification of the weather conditions - the earth is sleeping and the wind is breathing. Note the simile used to make a connection between the nature of the wind and death. The wind is as inescapable and as cold a death.
The Context of “The Cold Earth Slept Below”
There is some controversy about the date that the poem was written. Shelley's first wife, Harriet, had committed suicide by drowning in the Serpentine. Her body was recovered on the 10th December 1816 and there is a view that The Cold Earth Slept Below refers to her death.
Shelley died in a boating accident in Italy in 1822 and The Cold Earth Slept Below was not published until after his death. It first appeared in Hunt's Literary Pocket-Book , where it is headed "November 1815". It was reprinted in an edition compiled by Shelley's widow, Mary, in a volume with the title Posthumous Poems . Theories have been advanced that Mary Shelley changed the date written on the manuscript of the poem to 5th November 1815 so that it would seem to have been written prior to Harriet's death and therefore could not have been about her.
What is clear is that Mary Shelley edited out the publicly unacceptable aspects of the life of her husband in the first comprehensive collection of his work, published in 1839, which remained the authoritative text on Shelley's life until the beginning of the twentieth century ( Allen &Spencer, 2012). So it is not beyond the bounds of belief that the second Mrs Shelley changed the date on which The Cold Earth Slept Below was written.
A Brief Timeline of Events in the Life of Percy Bysshe Shelley
Percy Bysshe Shelley (PBS) born at Field Place, Warnham, West Sussex to Timothy Shelley, M.P., and Elizabeth Pilfold Shelley
Mary Wollstonecraft Godwin (later Mary Shelley) born to William Godwin and his wife Mary Wollstonecraft
PBS a boarding student at Eton College
Shelley's grandfather, the elder Percy Bysshe Shelley, created at baronet - taking the title Sir Bysshe Shelley
PBS's Gothic novel 'Zatrozzi' published
PBS begins studies at University College, Oxford, where he meets Thomas Jefferson Hogg
PSB's second Gothic novel, 'St. Irvyne' published
PBS meets Harriet Westbrook
PBS and Hogg write 'The Necessity of Atheism'
PBS and Hogg expelled from University College for refusing to answer questions about the authorship of 'The Necessity of Atheism
PBS elopes with the sixteen-year-old Harriet Westbrook and they are married in Edinburgh on the 29th August
PBS meets William Godwin in London
Ianthe Shelley born
PBS and Mary Wollstonecraft Godwin elope to France, accompanied by Mary's stepsister, Mary Jane (later Claire) Claimont,from where the quickly move on to Switzerland
PBS and MWG return to England
PBS's first son, Charles, born to Harriet
Sir Bysshe Shelley dies. During the following 18 months, PBS is involved in negotiations with his father over the the will, eventually receiving money to pay his debts and an annual income of £1000, of which £200 is earmarked for Harriet (later £120 for her children)
PBS, Mary Wollstonecraft Godwin, Claire Clairmont and Hogg engage in a free-love experiment
Mary Wollstonecraft Godwin's first child, a daughter born prematurely and dies on the 6th March
Shelley and Mary settle near Bishopsgate
A son, William, is born to Mary and Shelley
Shelley and Mary, accompanied by Claire Claimont, leave England for Geneva They tour extensively, returning to England in September
Shelley and Mary arrive in Portsmouth, after which they settle in Bath
The body of Harriet Shelley, who has drowned herself, is found in the Serpentine
Shelley and Mary Wollstonecraft Godwin marry
The Chancery Court denies Shelley custody of Ianthe and Charles, his children by Harriet
Clara Shelley born
PBS and MWS leave for the Continent, accompanied by Claire Clairmont, three children and two female servants. They travel extensively in Italy, returning briefly to England during 1820
Little Clara Shelley dies
William Shelley dies
The Shelleys move to San Terenzo on the Bay of Lerici
PBS, in the company of his friend Williams, starts out on the return voyage of a sailing trip to Leghorn.
The bodies of two people, one near Via Reggio and the other three miles down the shore, are identified as those of PBS and Williams
Allen, R. & Spencer, C.2012, A life' edited by Mrs Shelley' In Watson, N.J. & Towhead, S. Romantics and Victorians. Bloomsbury Academic, London, p. 41-45
https://www.rc.umd.edu/reference/chronologies/shelcron accessed 8th March 2018
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